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My take

You have some excellent ideas there, but I feel that they just aren't executed properly. Distorted synths are much more effective if you lead up to them rather than just letting them out of the gate on beat 1. Also, try introducing the distorted synth, and then go a way from it for awhile. That way, when you get back to the synth it has even MORE impact.

thatguy669606 responds:

Ok I get what you're saying...I'll definitely play around with that when I can get back to work on this.

My take

Absolutely brilliant! A 10 well earned my friend. With your permission I'd like to try and add some stuff to it. Lemme know...

Bru2712 responds:

Wow thanks I'm glad you like it =), and yes you can... do you need the patterns?

My take

You've got some really great ideas there, especially that chaotic little bit you have about half way through. Synth sounds a little weak though, try playing around with equalizers. Also, just a touch more variation, maybe in the beat, mainly the kick. Let me know if you decide to update it.

RawGreen responds:

sounds like a neat idea, I'll look into it sometime.

My take

Very bouncy, and very fun! Some of your timing choices are a little odd for my choice, especially near the beginning of the track. Keep at 'er!

DjJYo responds:

Thanks :)

My take

Excellent! I loves this right when your intro piano piece sucked me in. This reminds me of my 8 bit video game days. SWEET! More please =)

bnamdar responds:

Lol Thx ^_^

My take

There is a bit too much repetition before the changes, but, other than that I love the ambient feel of this track.

Veggie666 responds:

All rite thanks mate!!!

My take

I really love where you are going with this song. I see infinite potential. Bear that in mind as I deliver my critiques.

All of the notes are being hit at similar timing, and similar velocity. This creates a hypnotic effect that bores the listener. Try to not be so rigid in your song writing. Also, some more instruments in the right places will help accentuate key points that you are trying to make. Practice practice practice!

Never give up, and give 'er another go. You will get there, and I will proud of you when you do.

BigDrawMantheGoloid responds:

Wow thanks a lot for the advice.
I will never give up.

My take

I love some of the ideas but I think the main problem with the song can be summed up pretty easily. Check out articles on mixing, and learn about 3K theory. It's an audio frequency that the human ear cannot handle. Can't wait to hear your next track!

RoyalHardStyle responds:

Thanks for the tips man, and i will check out those articles if i can find them lol

My take

Very emotive. I got sucked in very quickly and was kept there. Good show!

LoopDaLoop responds:

Thank you for the review

Music is modern magic.

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